2015년 10월 29일 목요일

Blog Stage Five

  I always think what happen and what would make difference if I have a U.S citizenship. If I was born in here, I would be an American ,even my parents are korean.  I don't know if it is fair way to immigrant in United States without any permission. However, I can say that government works to block immigrant and have kids born are not fair. What you guys think about immigrant? Many people came to U.S and tried to make their kid born in there.  I would say it is totally okay , because they can do what they want to for their children.
  U.S is good country to live and we can see better future than other countries. Whoever born in U.S, they don't give any disadvantage to America, but U.S government tries to stop people immigrant in their country. I want to know the certain reason.
  I am just noraml student who came to U.S with student visa. Whenever I see asians who have citizenship, I am so envy about that. They would not have problem in U.S and treated as a nation. Some people really seek to live in U.S for dealing with job or pay money to get the right of permanent residence. It is really tough to stay U.S if we are not citizens. I wish U.S government doesn't seek to stop people to immigrants. They won't do anything bad for this country. They are same people and equal. I guess they just want to better life and change the life for their kids. Even though I am not included in citizen or immigrant, I can understand. There would be many intelligent people who can do their jobs well and it's good benenfi for U.S. I wish that immigrant won't be problem to government ,because America is the bright of future.

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  1. The editorial addresses the issue of immigration in the US and gives an opinion that it should be promoted. Although it lacks an introduction, its purpose and theme are clearly identified in the manner it emphasizes on the issue of immigration. Irrefutably, the editorial has extensively engaged the issue of immigration and does not mention specific personalities. Also, a desirable aspect is that it refrains from name-calling and does not in any way involve petty tactics of persuading the readers. Rather than mention specific names of individuals against illegal immigration, the editorial directs its complaints to the US government.
    The editorial's pro-active approach to making the situation of immigrants in the US better cannot be ignored. It gives a suggestion that students and other foreigners seeking better and brighter futures by migrating to the US should not be driven away or punished. It goes on to mention that most immigrants do not have the intention of doing anything bad for the US as a country. Thus, its solution is that the US government should allow immigrants to reside, learn, and work in the US.
    Apart from its outstanding content, the editorial is short and clear, and thus can be easily understood and interpreted by a reader. Although there are few grammatical errors here and there, the editorial's message is understandable. Moreover, the transition from one idea to another is commendable. For instance, the author begins by giving his stand on the issue of immigration specifically in the US, and this is followed by various reasons and facts in support of the position or stand. The author also wraps the editorial by giving a concise suggestion or solution of what should be done to address the challenges faced by immigrants in the US.

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